A woman in an attitude of prayer. Photo: By Naassom Azevedo on Unsplash.

'I tried...'

Poem: Perfect prayer

'I tried...'

by Poonam Jain 3rd January 2025

I tried

to draw into myself,

make a still inner space

stealing glances at two others

near me in the tiny chapel

one trying to rustle up piety

through mumbling of hymns

the other lulling herself into devotion

through careful arrangement

of candles and incense

all distracted

failing in some intent

finally succumbing

to whispering

about the everyday

an elderly father

a growing business

a new boss

a daughter’s ambition

a son’s dejection

you might have watched

our drawing into each other

and thought us

a kind of prayer

a kind of perfection.


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